Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Formal Presentations

Monday 23rd May

1620; W007

Salim Mohd H000546673

Generators

Solid introduction; well-organised.

Attitude & eye contact: started quietly but grew in confidence. Looked at the whole audience. Fielded questions well at end.

Slides: colourful, clear,well-labelled. Accurate English; no errors.

1640; W007

Ibrahim Abdulla H00214312

Polar bears facing extinction

Introduction & wrap: clear,well-organised and presented. Confident exposition and fielding of questions. Good eye contact.

Slides: colourful, informative; accurate English with no errors.

Overall:excellent presentation.

1700; W007

Mohd Ahmed Al Qubaisi H00210466

NGVs

Calm, clear introduction;questions at end handled most competently.

Body language & eye contact good. Mohd was composed throughout, exuding much more quiet confidence than in earlier,semi-formal presentation.

Slides: colourful, informative, accurate.

Overall: excellent.

1720; W007

Jassim Mohd 200304942

Black Hawk Helicopters

Introduction & wrap: clear, concise, questions fielded well.

Body language & eye contact: very good.

Slides: colourful, informative, accurate.

Tuesday 24th May

1420; W009

Hasan Abdulla H00131434

Garbage Disposal

Introduction and wrap: clear,well-organised & presented. Questions answered confidently.

Body language and eye contact: very good; Hasan grew in confidence as he progressed.

Slides: visually, excellent. English:not 100% accurate, e.g donation of old staff (which I took personally).

Overall: very good.













Monday 30th May





1420; Woo7





Hasan Jassim H00214055





Deforestation



Intro & wrap: generally well-handled. Question on biodiversity answered well; on desertification adequately.





Slides were colourful and text accurate.





1440; Woo7





Omar Abdul Aziz H00214383





Solar Energy





Effective introduction & fielding of questions.





Text on slides accurate.





Very competent in all aspects; highly technical & persuasive.





1500; Woo7





Mohd Salem H00154822





Smoking





Text on slides mostly accurate: presents (presented) by/way's (ways) to quit.





Slides visually very good; colourful & well-presented.





1520; W007





Jaber Abdi H00154812





Sheikh Zayed Grand Mosque




Intro & wrap: very good. Questions, e.g. Swarovski diamonds, very well dealt with.




Loud, confident delivery. Coherent & cohesive.




1540: W007




Omar Abdulla H00214401




Dubai Metro




Effective intro & handling of questions.




Text on slides mostly accurate.




Loud, clear delivery.




1600; W007




Anwar Mutar H00161004




Networks




Intro & wrap: excellent.




Slides: rather a lot of text on early slides; more monochrome than colour.




Fluent & well-paced delivery.




Occasional infelicity in text, e.g. among of them.



Tendency to read from text on slides, but everything explained fully, e.g. LAN (Local Area Network), Wan (Wide Area Network), network components, e.g. cables, switches, modems.






1620; W007




Mohd Ahmed Al Zaabi




Abu Dhabi Ambassador




Early slides contained a lot of text but Mohd did well to draw attention to salient points. Coherent, cohesive, clear, confident. Well-received by audience.






1640;W007




Abdul Aziz H00205269




Ferrari World




Good clear colourful slides but a few grammatical errors.




Rather attenuated.




1700; W007




Ali Saif H002214390




Social Networking




Very fluent, confident, well-paced & smoothly-delivered.




1720; W007




Mohsen Salem H00154767




Plastic Recycling




Text on slides (language): generally accurate. Easy to read. Not too much text.




Well-organised, e.g processes ofplastic recycling clearly presented: sorting, washing, drying, shredding, formation.




1740; W007




Hamdan H00211704




Evolution




A tricky topic which was explained very clearly & coherently.




Slides were uniformly colourful, clear & informative.




Questions dealt with patiently & logically.




Overall: very impressive.